Great job! OH MY GOD, i loved it, really truly, i loved it. it was amazing, the words and the way you put it together, just everything, it was completely awesome! I can't believe the feelings and emotions that I could sense were in that poem! holy crap, that was breathtaking! *5*

**meggie**

Oh my. That was really good. A tad sad. Buuut, Really good. The flow and everything was really good. And there was so much emotion in it. I loved it!! Keep up the great work! By the way, My fav stanza was the 3rd and 4th. They were great!! 5/5

.x.TaLeEe.x.

W.o.w. i loved this! it was so sweet and yet so sad.. you were completely selfless in this poem and it shows that you really care for the one you love.. this used great descriptions and beautiful words.. the flow was good and the rhymes seemed to work most of the time..

even though I want more, that how I will let it end
^ it should be "thats" not "that"

all in all, excellent write! really one of your best! 5/5

It's a nice poem.. aha! you treated a woman like a toy? tsk! that was bad... but to set her free is the best thingg to do... how sad... i hope you'll find the right one for you too... and please don't trreat women like toys... i think yuou should have learned your lesson ( i'm quite a feminist eh)

Eek... no i didnt do that i loved her no toy treatment.. i guess that was a bad line :P..

This poem is beautiful mainly because it is a man speaking openly about his feelings!

OH MY GOD it is an amazing poem i love it

Lovely Poem. I am amazed at the passion and feeling behind it.

Beautiful write. I found this loving and heartwrenching. The flow was nice and you could feel the emotion as it dripped off the page as you read.

My favorite stanza was :
It is difficult to put this forward, but I have no choice,
the decision is final, my heart will silence its voice
With love sometimes, the most difficult thing to do,
in the end will ultimately, help you pull through

I could totally relate. This girl just doesn't know what she has lost.
Hopefully you will also find someone who can make you this happy again!

My only suggestion is that some of the words (i.e. through) are used multiple times...and if you look up synonyms you may be able to find a similar word to replace where some of the words that become repetitive.
Awesome write!!

The poem was good, but it almost seemed like a letter in my mind. The flow was a little rough and it just came off to me as a letter. The message is very clear and you get your point accross. But like I said, it seems more like a letter than a poem, but if thats what you were going for than thats great. anyway, ttyl, your friend Al

I really like ur writing...its deep and has a lot of meaning in it..i hope that i can write as good one day...ne wayz...5/5

One of the best poems i have read, just great. nothing more, nothing less just perfect.

Wow that was great...i loved it...i would have to say one of the best that ive read so far...keep up the awsome work