Mesmerized

by Taye   Jun 7, 2006


I stand back and look not saying nothing at all.

You stand there like a man who's strong and tall.

I can't help but to melt inside,and feel over whelmed with joy.

If theres one thing i want in this world the most its for you to be my boy.

I would treat you right, give you my heart and body too.

Love you to no existent,even if were threw.

If you gave it a chance you would see i was right .

I'll tell u now I'm not going down without a fight.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Asher

    This is extremly good
    i love it it sends that message quick but sweetly

  • 17 years ago

    by Taye

    Hun just be glad i write as good as i do im 16 and a drop out from high school. Don't you think if i wanted to learn i would go to school.

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    There area few places you need to fix punctuation and word usage. "Love you to no existent", for instance. Do you mean "extent"? And "even if were threw" should be "even if we're through". Just a couple suggestions. It's a good poem though, I like the message.

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