This is a bold statement of playfulness but you should try and express how much it made you feel wonderful yawing for more scared neverous excited its missing that thing of the nature makes for a more intense read

Really good imagery. excellent. please write more. and check out my poems. that poem even made me feel alittle horny.

lots of love
hayley

Lol.. good poem! it was definetely hott.. and made me feel very horny! 5/5

That is awesome, but you should've gone longer! u should write another part and make it last really long..by the way did that really happen? hit me back!

Did this really happen???

come on girl, tell all!!!

were all entrigued!

Loved it...wish it was longer though and had more detail on your feelings.