Without you

by Queen Tanzy   Jun 9, 2006


Without you I'm lost, but since it is so real I'm not.

without you i cant dream badly,
cause your angels are watching over
me.

without you i feel that I'm different
from others.

without you i can see that i really love you.

with you knowing that our love makes me love you even more!

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  • 15 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Okay, this is different, but it is a decient write.

  • 17 years ago

    by broken heart

    Thnks for elling me i have talent i want and hope to be able to do this for a career but u never no wats gunna happen but yah ur a really talented writer to

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    This was cute nice job

  • 17 years ago

    by broken heart

    Thnks for the comment i was soo pi**ed it was like a day or to ago and u can really write well to i love this poem yah the guy broke up with me because people were telling him im a wh**e

  • 17 years ago

    by - xoxrachellee.;

    You point is very clear and i can understand what you're saying and the love you put in it. but the format of the poem could use some work. 4/5

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