Educational and interesting at the same time.
very creative
i loved it
~EMah

Once again amazing, i love how you arent afraid to write about things alot of our society dosent except.

This poem had a good subject, but I think it could use some work, I didn't think it flowed very well. Even when poems don't rhyme, you can still word them to flow a little better. But definately a great topic to write about.

I liked this one to, although some of the imagery kind of creeped me out a little. Another 5/5

Very dark topic, that had to be wrote about. i loved this!
5/5

I feel as if I was watching a movie. You a lot of strong descriptive words.

I liked how you used the moon to foreshadow and then conclude the poem.
"The moon faded behind clouds,"
Its setting the mood for the poem as well as foreshadowing (Its a dark setting for a dark time, the light flees from the bad thing that is about to happen.)

"The moon crawls out of darkness,
and the moonlight shines again."
The story is over and the light comes back out now that its safe. But it is crawling, that is creepy meaning the hero might have won but at a cost of something bad. However the moonlight shines again promising better days.
^Cool little idea of yours I liked :)

The rest, like I said was very descriptive and you chose the right words so everything flowed smoothly together.
Nothing wrong that I found.

Excellent
5/5