Comments : La La Land

  • 17 years ago

    by Angie

    Very creative and wonderfully written, I truly love it! Well done JL, well done.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    What a creative write JL . An incredibly sweet delight to read . I truely loved it ! And dang it made me hungry...
    Well done JL

  • 17 years ago

    by Tim Fleckney

    Wow no wonder Sunny is bragging about you, what a wonderful poem so much great imagry and emotion packed into a wonderfully flowing poem, thank you for such an excellent read.
    Tim

  • 17 years ago

    by JL

    Awwwww thanks guys! *hugs*

  • 17 years ago

    by Kim

    This was yummy to read! A true delight, filled with creativity and fun! A wonderful poem and well-deserved of reconigition ^_^
    Amour,
    Kim

  • 17 years ago

    by Sondos

    So dreamy and fantastic with lovely images mmm i agree with Sunny, I could eat it

    Sondos

  • The Secret To Creative Poetry Is Imagery, You've Won Me Over With This One, I'm Really Impressed, I Didn't Know All Of That Could Come Out Of You....You Have Awesome Potential And I'm Just In a "WOW" State Right Now lol *Luv U* 5/5
    xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Very cute! think about children`s books??

  • 17 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Great Poem, I enjoyed reading it- so thanx
    When you have the chance, could you rate my poem “If I”
    Appreciated- Truly Spoken