Heyy :D thanks for the comment, dude im loving this poem (: keep up the great p0ems and take care!

"You are a magazine that i can't subscribe,
You are a person that i can't describe, "
I felt like those two words were so similar that the rhyme would have worked better if there was a line between them, so instead of having a rhymed couplet you could have an ABAB quatrain.
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"and tell me true,
do you?"
I felt like the last line was too short for the rhythm of the poem. Try reading the poem out loud, and feeling how long the last line should be; at least a few more syllables.

Hwy wow...i really like this poem...it is awsome how u described ur feelings..5/5/
Jennifer

Same thing the way i feel about samantha all the way i love your work! cant wait till you write more.

I love this
broken heart so hard to mend
sometimes you got to hate love
keep writing
xoxoxoFAKE ROMANCE

Awesome writer nice work keep it up honey

Very good i like it alot keep up the good work

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Awwe that was such a good poem! ur really good i loved it keep it up! 5/5 xxx

I love this peom. i can feel the emotions in it.. great work keep it up

Nice poem keep it up, 5/5