I'd really appreciate some feedback on this poem, it's about a near accident i had in a pool.

I ove the rhythm of this poem it's really smooth. it's good

Hey jared,

I can relate to this poem for many reasons. I really don't know what to say. Darkness is good in a poem.

Care

Hey, i really liked this poem. i liked the way it flowed.

This is a unique poem, i like it. =D theres not to many i have seen like this. keep writing, u have so much potential,
xxx

Darkness.. yeah i know what u mean.. well any ways it was a really great poem w/o a doubt. Keep up the cool work. ^_^