I would care!.....it doesnt have to rhyme its good just cuz it doesnt rhyme.

Wow...it made me think of all the times my friends cut and i told them not too...then in the past month or so i started to cut...and i wanted to die....and my friends helpped me out and wut not....great poem i loved it XOx Laura Marie akak Sweets

Hey girl i no how u feel just read my poems u will see

It doesn't have to rhyme to be a good poem. i liked it
you spelled a couple words wrong, im not sure if you meant to do that or if it was an accident but i just wanted to clarify that with/for you.
keep writing
~HazE

This is a gweat poem. it doesnt have to rhyme, the flow of it was all good. its related to your first poem too isnt it? please be strong and do your best to keep ur head up high. keep writing!

Hey this is so sad! i really like the theme of this and the way its written.
well done!
love mel

I love this poem. its like my life. its so sad but i know how it feels. 5/5