Second chance...

This is actually a song that I wrote.
And I'm actually very proud of it.
So please comment.

These sutures won't possibly do
When my heart is fractured in two
From your carelessness
Won't you share with me
What went wrong this time

Around in your circle of madness
And I'm getting dizzy..
Around in this sphere of no ending
Let's fly away please
From this place that we seem
To call home.

This 2nd chance may be your last
When my heart is beating this fast
From your crooked smile
Won't you stay a while?
And take me...

Around in your circle of madness
And I'm getting dizzy...
Around in our love never-ending
Lets fly away please
From this place that's supposed
To be home.