I feel so damn lost
Pulling my hair and scream
How did I end up like this
Wake me from this dream
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Loved that stanza. It was great. This poem was really good and you expressed everything so clearly. Great job. Keep it up and smile. =] 5/5

`Taleee xx

Tears are rolling down my face
I can't take this anymore
I hate this damn depression
Was I ever happy before
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Oops, now I'm crying =(
this is really sad
really great also!
I love this stanza and the whole poem is just..so sad =(
hope you're Okay
Luv U
NemO x0x0x0x0x

Aw so sad, don't ever give up, even when you're lost theres a way out, believe me. :(

Hey babes, hope you are ok and everything. I feel kinda sad today so i'm not writing much but I promise i'll keep upto date from now on. :)

Heej Gurl,

I love this poem, I mean the way its written, So Very sad and i just want to let you know that, I really do know how you feel!!! just dont give up if you give it time it will pass!!! ---x---

Hey gurl! rember me??? ur *maybe* relative?? lol i really liked this poem! i havent been on in a while and i wanted 2 read one of urs!
-Lucy-

Man Gurl I wanted to cry... I almost did

Jesus! YOu are such a great writer! THis is beautiful writing, even though its about this. ((No worries,me2)).

Love this poem. Its a great expression of your emotions. Good stuff :)

That is really powerful. good work.

Wow, deep, powerful, full of emotions, and beautiful in it's own special way! GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! perfect score

Wow, i love your poems, they are awesome and this was no exeption. wow, i loved it
keep writing
xxxxxxx

Hey Sabrina,

This is Mike, we used to be in the same poetry club together, i dunno if you remember me though. you have a very special gift for writing, and better yet you can even help me in some ways with the poetry club that you just signed into, I manage it and i'm thankful to have someone as talented as you to join us and this may make the discussion board a little interesting so thanks for jpoining, nice poem 5/5 good job keep it up

Very very sad. it's extremely powerful and flows flawlessly. fabulous.

Oh dear. I really hope this isn't about you. It's heart-wrenching to read.

You've nailed the pain of depression, and it certainly shows the anguish one must feel during these sad times.

x

Like always amazing poem! I love it-Everything is perfect: the flow, word choice, rhyme. The emotion in it is expressed perfectly. Great write! 5/5

This is a very sad poem, the intensity of your pain comes through
very clear, If this is about you , Don`t
be afraid to ask for help. Depression
is hard to overcome on your own.I wish you a future filled with happiness. great poem!

It brought tears to my eyes.. it's so sad.