Comments : You Drifted Away

  • 14 years ago

    by Dre4meR

    This is such a wonderful poem...i love this piece of writting

  • 14 years ago

    by â—ŠJâ—Š

    Great poem...i love ur poems..beautiful sensations on this one...just wonderful
    ;)
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by dora

    This was really beautiful a p0weeful piece with a great use 0f w0rds. always luv reading ur w0rk. keep em c0ming =] xx

    l0ve fr0m
    d0ra

  • 14 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Welcome back and as always u came back with a bang, what a great poem, u gave a very surprising twist right at the second last stanza and that simply thrilled me as all of a sudden the track was changed and a love poem turned to be a lost love poem. Its like a complete story has been shared within mere 6 stanzas, beautiful indeed.
    i just love ur work.

    all the best and take care

  • 14 years ago

    by Nee

    Wow your poem was incredibly sweet!
    amazing piece of work, great job! Love the ending SO much!
    you did a great job hun =)
    Best Of Luck
    NemO x0x0x0x0x

  • 14 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Melodic and so flowin... With loving thoughts and feelings... So perfect it's untouchable, yet So pure that it is bliss.

    beautiful penned my friend, flowed with beautiful emotions written, what else i can say....well done!

  • 14 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful Michelle, superbly penned!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by troy

    Toooooo long dude!!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Fadedstar

    Wooooah..
    amazing poem.
    soo good !! great job/ loved it!

  • 14 years ago

    by Steffje

    I really love this poem and I love the way you write and put down the words, it makes it really easy to read! keep it up

  • 14 years ago

    by Trish

    I really love this poem. You're really good I hope to read more of your poems in the future.

  • 14 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Great Poem, I enjoyed reading it- so thanx
    When you have the chance, could you rate my poem “If I”
    Appreciated- Truly Spoken

  • 14 years ago

    by La ShOrTy

    I really loved this poem and every other poem. very well written and all match with me, specially this one bcuz im going through this right now..keep up with the good lyrics and rhymin and feelings, you use them all well. 5-5

  • 14 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    Some ppl dear, r just faces and inside r empty yet they r lucky enough to meet some with kind and pure hearts who can't tell wut is behind that charming faces. i loved ure poem and esp the last stanza.

    All the best and sorry fro my late comment,
    Wishy

  • 14 years ago

    by David

    What a great poem to read. I was really intrigued all the way through. Thought it was very deep and could really feel the message you were sending. The last couple of stanzas were breath taking

    well done

    dave x

  • 14 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    A very nice written poem, your all poems are great. i really like them. you are the greatest poet in this site.

  • 14 years ago

    by Fredaeya

    Its wonderful..it reali is. i hope ill read more from u, 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Renee Kotva

    Michelle,
    Wow that left me feeling so empty ( thats a good thing). This was written so well. With such detail of a lover then all of a sudden a betrayer, I hope that everything is ok. And again a lovely piece
    God Bless
    Renee

  • 14 years ago

    by MissSideways

    Farout!!! i loved every bit of that. ur very talented hunny! never give up!! lots of love,
    dani xxx

  • 14 years ago

    by Sourav

    The last stanza and the last line is so beautiful! I always love your style of writing. This poem is so heartfelt... so touching... Wonderful!