Welcome back and as always u came back with a bang, what a great poem, u gave a very surprising twist right at the second last stanza and that simply thrilled me as all of a sudden the track was changed and a love poem turned to be a lost love poem. Its like a complete story has been shared within mere 6 stanzas, beautiful indeed.
i just love ur work.
I really loved this poem and every other poem. very well written and all match with me, specially this one bcuz im going through this right now..keep up with the good lyrics and rhymin and feelings, you use them all well. 5-5
Some ppl dear, r just faces and inside r empty yet they r lucky enough to meet some with kind and pure hearts who can't tell wut is behind that charming faces. i loved ure poem and esp the last stanza.
Wow that left me feeling so empty ( thats a good thing). This was written so well. With such detail of a lover then all of a sudden a betrayer, I hope that everything is ok. And again a lovely piece