Wow, beautiful poem. it hit's home, how time can fly by and we don't even pay attention sometimes cuz we're too occupied with the pain. keep writing.

alwayz,
*ophelia*

This poem was amazing. xox

keep writing

This was a great poem good job.........5/5

Wow..that was beautiful...i really loved it! I completely felt your emotions!!

I can really relate to this poem. My mom had a miscarriage as well. I always wonder if the other baby would have been happier then I am.

Great one. I can relate to this, the time you sit at home pondering in bed at night, it is probably the worst and lonely times I have in my book. Don't ever wish anything like that though, be glad you are living another day. There is so much we don't see. Thank you for your comments on my poems and keep up your good work! 5/5

This poem is very deep and dark, I am pleased to read it, I hope you relise That I was truly touched by this poem, in a good way, Flow was on target, and Imgry could have been better, but a great poem all and all

This s a very deep and well written peice. has much feeling within and a very clearly presented content. the flow is smooth making for an easy read and the content clearly and simply presented yet maintaining a degree of depth and meaning

"I dont think I want to die,
But I know I dont want to live,"
^I can really relate to these lines. not wanting to die, but also no longer wishing to live...

great peice
5/5

If this was a true story, I would feel horrible!! I don`t think that the subject should feel guilty about her mother`s loss of children. But that`s beside the point.
You`re a great writer -- I love your work. Its interesting and just overall, great.

**Samantha Hollywood

This is another great poem! All of your poems have so much emotion in them. Amazing write. Keep it up!