With The Pieces

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With the Pieces

1: once upon a time there was a girl who everyone envied,
but no one really knew that inside she was just empty,
they thought she had everything they thought she was too good,
too good for any boy but she was misunderstood,
all she wanted was just to be loved like how she once was b4,
but her love let her down for it was her heart that he tore,
she loved him too much \"its all my fault \" he says,
even though he shattered her heart she still loved him with the pieces.....................

So alive

2: she finally realized he changed and never will be the same,
she will NOT love him again because of who he became,
time heals wounds and she was surprised how time flies,
she forgot ALL about him all the pain all his lies,
............one day someone caught her off guard truly a surprise,
it was crazy when she sees them her heart melts in their eyes,
amazing how her feelings began to build up inside,
she hadn�t even kissed them yet but she felt a connection so amazingly alive!

the Kiss

3: she couldn�t believe how she felt she began to like them more an more
her once broken heart began to heal no longer tore
then finally THE KISS
IT WAS AMAZING it was bliss
the chaos and serenity DAMN the one you shouldn�t miss
it was not just anyone it was like nothing she ever felt before
gave her butterflies , chills touched her heart straight to the core
it was the sexiest kiss ever you know that kinda sexy where you gotta bite your lip
where you close your eyes as your knees shake cause the kiss quivers your hip
and just for a moment there time just for them stood still
it wasn�t just there lips touching, each others hearts they can feel

to good to be true

4: she began to wonder if she would be loved back
All she wanted was someone to keep her heart intact
Her heart hurt once again she could feel the stab
How come the one you want the most is the one you can�t have
It was like an infatuation passionate lust
it was inevitable too good to be true was a must.........
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