Simply amazing! I am almost speachless...that was very deep and thought provoking.

Deep and concise! An impressive display of your poetic talent. Enjoyable, well structured and overall... brilliant!

"and I'm trying to dress words
in floral print and lace,
but dainty thorned roses
bleed heartache's fate"

Wow! Once again you've blown me away in such few lines. As I continued reading, I was thinking "This can't get any better". But once again you've proved me wrong.
From beginning to end it is flawlessly written. Take care and keep it up~Holly

It want hte greatest but it was good

Wow, i am s.p.e.e.c.h.l.e.s.s., hope to see more of your great writing you inspire me to raise to greater heights
love and luck
mollyjade

Amazing.

I loved this poem...lovely....I hope to read more of your poems. This waas very good, keep it up.
5/5

Breanna

This is really very lovely
I adore your way with words

Wow this is really good.

Wouderful poem... u can really paint with words:)

Great Poem, I enjoyed reading it- so thanx
When you have the chance, could you rate my poem “If I”
Appreciated- Truly Spoken

I REALLY LIKE IT! YOU SHOULD COME CHECK OUT MY POEM ITS CALLED SAFTEY PIN! BUT YEAH I HOPE YOU COME READ MINE!!! I REALLY REALLY LIKE YOURS THOUGH 5/5

WOW! DEEP LICK, I THINK GOOD CONTINUE WRITE

Writing pleasure from youand the reading joy is from my end... be my creme guest cos I like your style of writing...

Nazeer

It is very interesting. Atmosphere is great and you wrote this one excellently. Emotions are superbly described. 5/5

Oh what a beautiful write, you are so gifted at encapsulating truth and experience into lovely prose which speaks so much in such concise and moving language.

Brilliant poem very well expressed. Thank you.