Hey girl me again! yem x yer dis a good one its sad girl bless ya!! love yaz yem xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

I know what its like to lose someone close. theres an empty space and it feels like no one can fill it. your poems are fab. keep it up xoxoxoxox

This was perfect for me. I have one Nan that had already passed on and the last one is not doing too well.

I love this poem i have a personal connection with it because i lost my best friend...your a great writer sweetie

That was fantastic ^_^ I went through the exact same thing with my Grandmother and it still hurts after almost 5 years =( A truly great poem 5/5
Dark Angel Of The Night, Rhea

Nice poem! I liked how the sentences varied in length...made reading it more fun.

Good job.