I'd just take out the and in the final stanza. It might flow better without it. It's a pretty poem. Probably would have been beautiful if you described things deeper like the red rose or the rainbow etc

Wow! Another great job! Nice flow, great description and very deep emotion. 5/5 Keep up the good work!

-Stephanie-

Sweet, nice imagery, painted a picture in my mind! I'm just letting you know that I really enjoy reading love poems! GREAT JOB! 5/5

Awww!! This was so sweet! I loved it =D
Espeically the last stanza. That was a great way to end it I though. Aww, I still can't get over how sweet this was lol. Really good job again Jessy. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Wow jessy, that was really nice, and sweetly written. the comparisons were done nicely....all in all a great piece!

That was a great poem, good job
Thanks for your comment on If I :)

Hey jessy! exellent work! lovely poem! dis is da best poem of urs! keep up da gr8 work!

Awsome job on this poem...I really enjoyed reading this.

Awesome poem =) thought id return the comment favour! reli like ur writing, keep posting them!
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Very sweet and touching.whoever this is about never let them go.it was a beautiful piece of work.keep it up!
--lexie

This is a very touching poem dont ever let go of the person this is to and i mean ya kno never give up on love and stuff..

This is wonderful! I love this poem. I have someone that I feel this for, so I can relate. Awesome poem; keep up the work!

I love poems like this, this was beautifully done
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Oh wow... so cute... loved it

5/5

kazza