This is rele deep adn powerful. i like it. ur a very talented person.. this is a good poem. keep writing i would like to read more.. 5/5
angie

Hey darl this was very deep and sad, l0t 0f em0ti0n in it. kepe it up. g0od j0b expressin urself. xx
l0ve fr0m
d0ra

Pretty good rhymes, though I think you could have included more details about your life and the action you were seeking advice for the other day. I can understand that the repitition of "I" was purposeful (as implied by the title of the poem), but in the future I'd suggest repeating words that hold more meaning.

WOW! this is deep gurl~! nice job! good emotions! 5/5 for me!

The vocabulary in this poem is very strong...If I was forced to give a way to improve I would say that the flow is off centered; the rhyme scheme seems forced causing an unbalance in the poetry flow.

[PygmyPuff]

I really like it. There's not much I can say bad about it at all. I'm not a big fan of an overuse of the period (.) though. Three of them in a row is enough to prove the point, honestly. Great job though :)

Hey i love it i can understand the point you were writing from it sounds very similar to something im going through right now 5/5 keep up the good work