This is really good poem. I like it becuase of the the first two line that have to do with the rest of stanza. This poem I would tell to my girlfriend or a crush. I hope you will read and comment on mine.

Very sweet poem... truly written by someone in love... only comment is to review the first sentence of the last stanza, didn't make much sense to me... otherwise, good write. 5/5

And I just love your poem! Once again you came with a bang. This is such a sweet and romantic poem. Your true passionate love is overflowing through out the whole poem. Great job yaar.

Best Wishes
Michelle

Ali,
this is such a wonderful poem, so full of emotion and romance. i truly enjoyed reading this poem. it's great and well written. take care my friend, and it's always a pleasure to read your poetry... hugs.