Comments : Your state

  • 14 years ago

    by uponfairywings

    Great poem!

    xoxoxo Haley

  • 14 years ago

    by smile

    Great poem
    sad but amazing
    well done 5/5

    thank you for the comment on mine


  • 14 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I love the way that you ended this. Very well thought out. i love this! Great job. You are very talented!

  • 14 years ago

    by Love Panda


    october xx

  • 14 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Mmm. That's sad, but I liked it. I thought the general wording and flow was good/

  • 14 years ago

    by Willow

    Oh thats beautiful. u poor person. i hope things get better for u. thanx for the comment too. i'm trying to release in poems not my arm.
    love willow xxoo

  • 14 years ago

    by amelia

    Nicely written

  • 14 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Awww i love it. its sad but i like it. thanx for the comment on my poem.. but i cant help but give up.. ne ways amazing poem. i love it. keep it up
    take care
    luve angie