A very sad emotional peice. It was a little rocky is some areas's, But overall I thought it was pretty good. I liked these lines alot:
"If you can’t understand that then just depart
Because you don’t care that you have my heart"

You've done a pretty good job on this one, Keep it up =) 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

The flow and technicality of this poem is excellent, the emotion i see them pouring out, and I feel for you. but on a personal here is an advice, nothing lasts for ever, evne your truest friend will depart, you want to know who's your best friend, the paper and pen, that's it, trust these two and keep on writing, well done on this poem

I love this poem the rhyme is perfect and makes it flow beautifully i loved to read it and could feel the emotion. its really sad and i just want to say i hope you can move on cause one person shouldnt be allowed to cause that much pain, remember there are people who love you. dont waste away over some guy. . .i know ive done that.
hope all goes well for you
Love and Smiles
Ally

This poem does show you put a lot of emotion into it. Cutting poems aren't so great, overplayed, they are getting old. But this one was alright. Good stuff.

Dis is a gud poem....nd a sad 1ne too...well gud job..5/5

That was soooo sad .... but very good.... keep up the good work...... u can tell you tried really hard. 5/5

The flow is great ,,,the emotional tragedy is expressed in a contemperary theme

This poem is so sad to read filled with so much emotion.
really great work keep it up.

5/5

gem