Jessy~~ This poem made me depressed again!!! How can you write the poem very sad but also lovely like that?? Your words are well chosen for describing the SWEETEST love i've ever read!!! Good job!!

This is a really beautiful poem, sad yet shows all the good times you had and love shared, awesome job

The story you tell in your poem is lovely and so sweet. I liked the way you described the seasons and what happened.

Good job! 5/5

Keep writing.

Wonderful job, thanks for entering my contest

Again, I couldn't hep reading it, because it is a love poem! nice job!
5/5

That was a bit sad. I really liked how you worded this. Cause, although it sounded abit sad, you made it have this warm feeling to it. Really good job! 5/5 =D

`Taleee. xx.