I reckoned your poem was awesome! you are pretty good at writing poems. I'm no expert, lol, and neither is anyone else much on this site. *sssh* but you have some amazing lines!
*jess

Have to agree with whats-her-face up there....Jess, I think...This poem has some amazing lines...some made me shiver because they were SO truthful...I don't pretend to be an angel, that's for sure, but I do know a lot of those fears and I think the way you wrote it...it was twice as powerful without rhyming, which is rare for me to ever admit to cuz I'm one of those people who loves a regular flow and catchy lines. But this was remarkable and beautiful at the same time. Loved it!

I agree with the other 2, this was beautiful and had very powerful and truthful lines. well, you may not no anythinkg about poetry, but when you write it, you are an expert! loved the poem, 10/10. off the charts, chica!
~OnTheRunFromLove~