Comments : The Day You Passed Away

  • 19 years ago

    by smile

    This is a truly deep poem
    full of your love
    i hope you can find the right words to express your feelings, and all the best.
    This is a beautiful poem, and i hope you and everyones else can enjoy it

    best wishes,

    **smile**

  • 19 years ago

    by uponfairywings

    Beautiful start, I think you should contunue it. So far, sounds like a masterpiece, great job!

    xoxoxo Haley

    ps thnx for your comment on my poem