Excellent!!
I loved how u didnt focus on the rhyme!
it was really Fascinating and wonderful!
Great job on this one Shayma2 XD
keep it up
Always waiting for more!!
Yours,
Ne3ma xXxXxXxX

I really loved this poem,, very beautifully written,, ow and im speachless...
keep up the great work,
take care,,
luv,,
haya 3gab =]

Wow, this poem is really and touching and so emotional.I am so sorry for your loss, but I am sure one day you are going to find the person who will deeply love you and care about.Just never give up hope and never surrender.
Your poems are really close to my heart.
5\5.

**HUG** love this poem its to sweet love it take good care of your self and keep writing this wonderful poem 5/5

Sometimes we find life unfair. Why do someone whom we loved passed away? why him/her? Through happy memories of the past, it encourages that life merits to continues. The positive thing about a lost, is that you can still find but never it can be replaced.
Excellent write, great poet.

kelleyana