I feel the same way about my girl- keep up the good work 5/5

I WAS ONLY 14-15 YEARS OLD WHEN I WROTE THIS

Ooo i like that i love the words and the figurtive langauge that u used and i love how u out alot of emotion into it keep it up..!

Ooo i like that i love the words and the figurtive langauge that u used and i love how u out alot of emotion into it keep it up..!

Oh, God, how this takes me back.Love, friendship, moments that you want to hold on to forever.You have captured the innocence and purity of these somewhat fleeting moments so perfectly.The feeling of love yet the sadness of feeling something slipping away....This is beautiful.Very well expressed..
Take care,

Gary Jurechka

Wth is wrong with u? i'm not gona go up to u and ur poem is retarded...learn to keep ur mouth shut

Thanks for voting for me it means alot anyway nice poem 5/5

Thanxs 4 writing me it meant alot anyway 5/5 on your poems i thought it was very nice keep up the good work

I like your style of writeing

Very deep for a 14-15 year old write! Well done. Its amazing how no matter how serious a relationship gets, you never can shake that little feeling of doubt in the back of your mind that it might not last... Suppose its human nature. :)