Comments : Had you been sleeping

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Is this the one you submitted to your Lit Class??

    my heart was yours
    you apologized with sweeter words
    that caused a breakdown to match
    the worst
    with strings still tied to you

    I think that's the most hard-hitting right there. Made me sigh. lol

  • 17 years ago

    by alex

    Okay i really hate to read your poems. there just another reminder that you're a better writer. damn you