This is a passionate poem with a nice flow

Hey there thnks for checking out my poem. really feels good when sumone cares to read ur work. ur poem is too good man, really sweet, its a short poem and when i came to the end of it i was so sad that its over, it was like goin in sumother world which is beautiful as anything can be. grest work

Aww I LOVE this...def. the sweetest thing I've ever read!!

Great flow, keep it up!

joy*:..xx

Wow, im touched, this is a true piece of poetry written with care and devotion. it is obvious that you have written from the heart and that you have a greta talent. keep it up. soz it took so long to get back to you but i've been a little erm out of it lately. anyway thanx 4 the comment, i'd apreciate another maybe on my knewer, poems? thanx. anyway great poem which i loved. amy must be please to have a guy like you.
i also love the rhyming triplet at the end great finish.
anyway take care and keep it up.5/5

Very good 5/5