I liked it - I have never heard of this style and looks like a very challenging way to present one. Cheers, and thx for comments on mine - DM

It does look very challenging...this is good...keep it up

Totally awesome. I liked the triangle pointing to the right. The pace was exceptional. I never seen one before. thanks for sharing.

I love writing poems in that style!
very good by the way. i liked the woding of it, and how each line flows seamlessly into the next.

thnks for the comment also. ^_^