I love this poem
its very wel written and the words,well,...ana mush dale3a fel Eng so I didn't get lots of the words bs still I always use my dictionary =D keh keh,lol!
I love how you wrote it..and well, that was one of the greatest dark poems I've ever read...counting "from hell to hell" with them =)
You wrote this one in a very good way and the flow of rhyme was so perfectly chosen
great wonderful work hun
ILY
NemO x0x0x0x

Oh Yeah I'm having exams pray for me b2a, 3leya economics 2moro and just had Geo! thanks for your concern*bunches*

Seems very well written! you have developed a new and nice usage of the words! I like it :)

Wow very well written.. good work..i give 5/5.. hey thx for commenting on my poem.. hey i m not from Egypt... i m from Maldives..

[played that play in 6 th grade] lol nothing to do with the poem though
loved it, dark, but very well written

A dream of a girl that can't be delighted.
A poem well written, can also be sighted.
You work to write all your thought
and greatness is all that you wrought.

Great write
From Poetry Knight

I think this one is one of my favourites now :)
Oh yeah, you do have other poems, I just didn't see the other pages :p Words like besitality and hate? There's a band called Cradle of Filth that uses so many strong words, I don't even understand half of them :)

This was absolutely breathtaking.
I'm like addicted to your poems =)
When I saw the title
I wasn't really sure what to expect
in of this poem
but WOW!! I am so glad that I read this.
I think this is 1 of the most powerful pieces I
have read.
I actually wanted to write something
sort of with this idea
but after reading this I don't think I could ever
do such an outstanding job.
Your words were like daggers.
I dunno what else to say except this was amazing... it deserves way more than a 5!!!

love
shellaine x

Wow this poem is breathtaking i love the word choice and the flow of it, it is just a flawless poem!

I really love the words you incorporate into this i haven't heard them used to often and its refreshing to actually read a more complex poem
5/5

Love this poem it really shows the flow (^_^) keep up the wonderful poem (^_^) 10/5

Dark sight in my heart
I fell in the devil's art
my beliefs were captured
that I ever wanted to gird

I think we all fall at some point. Nice verbage and very descriptive.

I reined my bloody thoughts
in all the psychopathic roads
I amputated love and kindness
using the dirk of loneliness

Good use of metaphors here. I can feel the lonliness and pain through your words.

And in my thorny black blood
I was tainted with the mud
I bowed and drowned so deep
allowing my arteries to seep

Again, more great metaphors, I Love This

I submitted to Lucifer's will
my faint heart tasted hell
and the stirring cruelty of pain
I suffocated in the shrew as a v

You have great insight into your own mind. I can tell that you draw from deep within. That is what makes your poetry so good and so interesting to read. Keep releasing, and I will keep reading. Excellent work.