Ohh, I had dreams about the minotaur in love before. Great use of words and imagery

Once again it got the words out in your heart and thats the most curcial thing in a poem. amazing job, it was pretty creative too, 5/5

I am afraid my comment cannot do this masterpiece justice. it is absolutly mysteriously beautiful

Purity leaked from my limbs
Electricity blinded my sight
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I loved those two lines. This poem was also great! Again, it was just the way you worded it. You made it really interesting to read. You kept my attention from start to finish. So awesome job!! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Mystical poem, not knowing much about a minotaur your words did capture my attention. A talented writer.

This was such an original and unique idea. I loved the mystic feel of this poem, and imagery. the only line that didn't really fit (in my mind) was
"Fish swarmed the skies, not fishing nets" A very well written poem ^_^ Great job!

Once again I thought the flow and allwas great but I dont know what in the world a minotaur is!!!! The part where your fingers drooled and your tongue shrivled was weird and it just does not make sense to me! Please read rate and comment four of mine as promised in the forum1

He was at least 3 times my size
And I was dressed in virgin white
Purity leaked from my limbs
Electricity blinded my sight
[I thought that stanza was GREAT!]
Your wording in this again was really good. The flow was good aswell. I don't see anything at all wrong in this peice. You're a great writer! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.