Nice job.

Great job, you can add more imagery and flowery words to it. Keep it up

Very nice...

I liked it! There were a few places where it didn't flow well, but the overall poem was really good! Great Job!

Wooww.. i can SO relate to this.. except the guy knows i like him.. and im not coming back after summer.. but the emotions are the same.. this had a lot of feeling and the flow was good! keep it up! 5/5

Hey thaks for your comment at my poem your good