THat was so sweet.

This is cute nd u can tell ur feelingz fo her but da 1st part really didn't go wit da rest...otha den dat gud...5/5

Awww thats was soo adorable your gonna make that girl very happy

I likeed this u really expressed ur feelings! keep writing

This is wonderful. You express a lot of emotion here.

Nice. i like it

Aww,, that is so sweet, did u seriously give that to someone?

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Awwwww, look at you.. Such a warm-hearted dude.. Dat girl should be happy to say yes

Awws, that was short, but nonetheless, your emotions were strong.
I honestly loved it, it's one of the sweetest poem's i've ever read.

A good piece, I liked it, though I dodn't have a favorite stanza, I'm afraid, it was all pretty equal, however, I think its probably one of the first two, because they were more powerful, flowing and had better rhymes.

Brad

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