I love the imagery in this poem, The whole idea of yellowed dry grass getting kissed and reconected with it's love rain. I did a haiku once and it wasn't as good as this one but I do understand how challenging these kinds of poems can be and I believe that you handled it very well!

Graceful haiku, very relaxing poem

For some reason I think, "new" should be ,"A new" But I realize it would ruin the syllable count. Haiku's are difficult to express meaning within so little. I'm not sure if it was wise to use the word, "The" but you handled it pretty well considering the message you were sending.

I'm not one for haikus, but thats awesome dude!!

Hmm.. It's hard to comment haiku's when they're so small lol. But this was pretty good I thought. I liked the second line alot. I thought that was great. But with this line:
"The dry, yellow grass"
Do you need the comma there? It just sounded abit weird reading it like that. Still a really great haiku though. 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

A very gentle poem, rather calming. A very nice haiku indeed.

The imagery in this poem is beautiful, really creates a strong picture in your mind, and is incredibly calming.

Like it.

Wow.. who gave you a four for that, huh? lol.. this definetely deserves only perfect 5's! this was powerful and yet so beautiful at the same time.. your descriptions really appeal to the senses.. just reading those three lines made me want to read so much more! truly excellent write! 5/5

The poem was diff, i liked it