Very good imagry Jessy! This poem was beautiful. =) You've written it so well! And don't worry about what it said in my profile. I was just upset, I'm kinda okay now. I'll prob keep writing. =) 5/5 Though. I did like this one. It had a great nice feeling to it!

`Taleee. xx.

Outstanding imagery flowing into this poem of natural beauty

Good job, you painted a great picture with words

"The beauty before me
Appearing slowly on my paper"
You ended two of your stanzas with the word 'paper'. For a poem that focuses so heavily on imagery and diction, repitition like that seems like a not so good idea, so I'd try to figure out a way to omit one of the 'paper's. Beyond that, great descriptions.

GREAT imagery in this one, I really had the picture in my head!! Great job!!

joy*:.xx

"I take a deep breathe
Open my hazel eyes"

I am in love with that line. Often when people talk about beauty and nature they don't reflect enough upon themselves and actually talk about seeing the nature, only what it looks like. lol Know what I mean? Very refreshing. I also loved how your talking about sketching the scene, and capturing it, not just in poetry, but in color. OMGoodness I just can't express enough how I feel about this poem lol. Absolutely wonderful.

Very beautiful imagery Jessy :)
Awesome stuff!

Wow that was real moving and just so refreshing ya kno and i havent read one like that b4 i love to read ur poems they are really good

Gr8 wor again. how is it that u are such a gr8 poet?! it amazes me. ever poem is good! thats awesome. anyway, wow gr8 work..yet again

Lovely poem, well done
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The flowers
Just starting
To say goodbye
Close up and get ready
For another
Long, peaceful sleep

that stanza is a little annoying, b/c it is choppy, but other than that, the poem was lovely and you gace autumn complete meaning.

Beautiful. Beautifully written, beautifully portrayed, and a beautiful image left in my mind, of my favourite season. Well done sweetie. xx

Hey! Great poem. Only, I dont think saying "Every Uniqueness" is proper english...try something like "All the uniqueness" or something. Just didnt think it sounded right. Other than that, great poem! xoxox

"The golden leaves
Flutter in the gentle wind
Gracefully falling from
The thick branches"

My favorite stanza. I loved this poem. Makes me wish it was fall even more now. Great job.

Beautiful. I wouldn't change a thing.

I love this poem! great flow! plz comment on mine :)