Just one thing. ever watch pink floyd's "The Wall"?

Wow that is probably the most interesting poem i have ever read... lol that wasnt scary at all though... but we can pretend... llamams are my second favorite aniimsl!! yay!! lol ~*~Leena~*~ i give you a 5

Yeah i got a little confused to sawy, it was good though

Hm. where is scary and gross?

This is excellent! seriously i have been searching for a poem like this and found it. i love your style! and i think certain styles don't appeal to a mass but they appeal to certain people. it appeals to me lol! its a great read. kept me on my toes! 5/5

It was very interesting..i understood most of it