Comments : The Scarred Star

  • 13 years ago

    by Jaime

    I wasn't sure where you were going with this at first, but wow! It had the rhythm and rhyme and all the normal stuff that everyone loves, but I thought the ides behind it was amazing. The last four lines were kind of underlined in my head, just stood out. Great job, I'll think of it everytime I'm wishing on a star hehe.

  • 13 years ago

    by Jaime

    Ideas***

    And oh yeah, and I forgot to add that I think the title stands out too, just fits perfectly.

  • 13 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    Beautifully written, and just a awesome poem in general. Keep it up.

    Rave

  • 13 years ago

    by Stacey

    Very well done :D

    the lines:
    ______________________
    Would take the bad out of my day
    And make it all turn right.
    ______________________

    were perhaps a little clumsy, but other than that it was GREAT poem. Rhythm and rhyme were exceptionally used :D

    Keep it up!

    p.s. Comment back?

  • 13 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Pretty good poem, i rated it 4/5 though cause it was too short.

  • 13 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Wow...I really liked this...It's not the normal topic you hear of being written about and I lovet he ending. 5.5

    xDarkSuicidex

  • 13 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I did actually enjoy this poem, at first i wasnt sure if i would like it, but once i had read it twice, i realised it is very very good, and i really did like it. It flowed well, was sad but had some meaningful output, well done
    xxxxx
    love Tara-Kay

  • 13 years ago

    by Driver

    Really good job. it flowed nicely and you put forth emotions, well written.
    Driver

  • 13 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    I loved this one. I love the imagery and the vocab was lovely. It flowed well and had a great ending
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by awww

    Nice poem... i like it... keep writing!

    ~angel~