I wasn't sure where you were going with this at first, but wow! It had the rhythm and rhyme and all the normal stuff that everyone loves, but I thought the ides behind it was amazing. The last four lines were kind of underlined in my head, just stood out. Great job, I'll think of it everytime I'm wishing on a star hehe.
Wow...I really liked this...It's not the normal topic you hear of being written about and I lovet he ending. 5.5
13 years ago
by Tara Kay
I did actually enjoy this poem, at first i wasnt sure if i would like it, but once i had read it twice, i realised it is very very good, and i really did like it. It flowed well, was sad but had some meaningful output, well done