I wasn't sure where you were going with this at first, but wow! It had the rhythm and rhyme and all the normal stuff that everyone loves, but I thought the ides behind it was amazing. The last four lines were kind of underlined in my head, just stood out. Great job, I'll think of it everytime I'm wishing on a star hehe.

Ideas***

And oh yeah, and I forgot to add that I think the title stands out too, just fits perfectly.

Beautifully written, and just a awesome poem in general. Keep it up.

Rave

Very well done :D

the lines:
______________________
Would take the bad out of my day
And make it all turn right.
______________________

were perhaps a little clumsy, but other than that it was GREAT poem. Rhythm and rhyme were exceptionally used :D

Keep it up!

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Pretty good poem, i rated it 4/5 though cause it was too short.

Wow...I really liked this...It's not the normal topic you hear of being written about and I lovet he ending. 5.5

xDarkSuicidex

I did actually enjoy this poem, at first i wasnt sure if i would like it, but once i had read it twice, i realised it is very very good, and i really did like it. It flowed well, was sad but had some meaningful output, well done
xxxxx
love Tara-Kay

Really good job. it flowed nicely and you put forth emotions, well written.
Driver

I loved this one. I love the imagery and the vocab was lovely. It flowed well and had a great ending
5/5

Nice poem... i like it... keep writing!

~angel~