Great poem, your message came across in a serious of emotional and heartfelt words! I loved it. Thank you for your comment on my poem. Keep it up!

To be honest if you don't mind the criticism its a fantatsic poem but the very first line doesn't need to really be there...But other than that you are a great writer

Ooo. I think this is a fabulous poem. ^_^ It was very well written. But I think it should be in the 'Dark' categories. It gave me a feeling that no other poem has. It gave me the idea that death is a person. Great literary device, even if you didn't realise it. >.< (Personification) Great write. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha