How it should be

by holly   Jun 19, 2006


You and me are meant to be,
like the stars are meant to shine.
Together, forever
that's how it should be.
Love for a lifetime
and dance everyday,
never give up,
never go away.
Fates brought us together
that's how it should be.

Baby please understand,
you are the one for me.
I don't care what you think
I want you by my side
holding me and loving me
by my side for all of time.

Give me a chance,
I love you I swear
I can't get over you
cause we are meant to be.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Polly

    "Fates brought us together"

    I think that should be "fate's brought..." I like the poem i understand how your feel. To improve it you could try altering the layout so it is a bit more even - it makes it easier to read and gives the poem a better flow. Take care,
    - Polly

  • 19 years ago

    by ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ

    Nice poem!! I didnt like how repetitive you were with the "we are meant to be". Overall Igive it a 4/5!! A few of the rhmes seeemed force other then that great poem!! Keep it up!!

  • 19 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    "You and me are meant to be,
    like the stars are meant to shine."

    I love those two lines. It was a great way to start. You were a bit repetitive with the whole "we are meant to be," but all in all, it had a strong message. Overall, I give you a 4/5. It was a good poem. You have great potential, keep writing!!

    ~BJ~

  • 19 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Hey nice poem- thanks for posting it because i enjoyed it, hehe
    If you could, please check out some of my poems, preferebly If I
    Appreciated- Truely Spoken

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