I really like this poem, it flows nicely plus it is exactly how i feel too.

W0w ! thats beautiful! especaially f0r the first 0ne!! i feel the same way y0u d0 t00! d0nt st0p writing!
l0ve always
aLi
xx l00k at s0me 0f mine t0 - u might like themxx

That was so sad but still beautiful...especially for your first poem. Good job...you've got talent, keep it up.
Thank you for the comment on my poem I reaslly appreciate it.
5/5
Breanna

Hey that is really great for your frist poem, it all just flows really well
great job 5/5

Amazing poem. it has alot of emotion and feeling put in it.. i love it. u r very good at writing. this is such a good poem. i feel that way to sorta.. i kno how u feel. but this is an amazing poem.. i lvoe it.. ur very very talented. keep it up.. i wana read more of ur poems... great job
take care and stay strong
luve angie

This poem was very beautiful. It was such an expression of emotion and feeling. Lovely stanza as well. You should keep writing. Excellent job.
Thanks for your comment as well :).

Hmmm...quite intrigued at this piece
Im glad youve joined cause you become even better as you progress in the site.
Thanks for the comment
~Em

Ill listen to ur story...

I know where your coming from I'm truely sorry, your not alone.

That is a great poem. i feel the same way.

Sadly, this is exactly like me

IN THIS PART

;I'm just another depressed teenager
[can] anybody see?
i wear black;

I think you should change the ' can' to a ' can't ' . it would rhyme better, and in makes more scense

GOOD JOB :)

Wow... your poems really remind me of my own life!

great poem once again

Omg i loved it i relate so much well except dying! but everything else i totally relate! ---