Comments : Without you around

  • 17 years ago

    by Poison Ivy

    I felt your pain through every word!~*

  • 17 years ago

    by TeAr dROp

    Wow your poem was so good keep it up!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by ALEX

    Woah.. this is pretty sick.

    sometimes your rhymes were off, but it was close enough so that it didn't offet the flow. some of your lines were simply amazing, so congrats on a fantabulous poem!

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