Beautiful poem, heartfelt words. I really understand your feelings here. It hits me hard because I can relate. Great job!

Ok...here goes. It wasnt one of my favorite poems, but it was good. You were right when you put at the bottom that it was a little rough. You would easily be able to fix this by spending more time working on it. The idea of it I love its just...hmmm...it doent feel done. I think it would be a lot better if you added to it and revised some of the wording. Overall I like it though! 4/5