I love it makes so much sence and is helpful.

I hear what you are trying to get across!
excelent vocab used. and it gives the reader a great and very strong message!
it is soo sad to think that there are kids out there who suffer so much.
great poem..really effective! keep up the good work and ill keep reading!

sophie:)

Wow!! i luv it, its just exelent, words: great, feelin: exelent, expression:WOW, message: #1. uu got it!!!!
P.S. i would really love it if u would chekc some of my poems and comment themm, pliz!!! thanx!!

Ur poem was very touching!
yet it is sad to say many who were raped or beatn or watever else usually grow up to do it to there own children.
i just hope there is enough out there to take a different turn. ANWAYS i loved ur poem good work!

Ive cut my wrists for reasons tht touched me

Awwwwwwwww thats so nice i really like that 5/5

GREAT!! I really like it since i'm a Kid well actually a Pre-Teen.

This is such a close to home poem, im glad you wrote it

+.+ They do deserve love and respect!! +.+

Great writing =)

This is absolutely beautiful. i really loved it.

OMG i loved this poem its sooooooo sad