Comments : Beneath My Eyelids

  • 17 years ago

    by NannO

    This is gr8... i do feel like that sometimes, but u reli penned it nicely.. it was structured less like a poem, tho.. lovd the title, it was very attractive,and i like how u personify the words, waking u up, etc..

    gr8 job
    keep it up
    take care
    NannO

    p.s. thnx 4 ur comment and the note.. ill see wat i can do to make it better.. thnx 4 the heads up :) it meant a lot to me

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    A writters dream or a writters reality?
    Either way its a great poem