This is really good. I know what drugs can do to a person. I'm 7 mounths clean. Drugs destroys lifes and friendships. I hope your sister sees this before its to late. When you get a chance stop by and see my new poem. "When I'm Gone" I'm also working on a poem about the effects of drugs. Stop by and check it out.

~AllyKelly~

Wow. i like this poem it reminds me of the relationship i have with my sis its basically exactly like the but the only difference is me and her use 2 b koo untell after i quit using thats when everything between me and her changed it really sucked cuz i been trying my hardest 2 get her 2 quit 2 but u cant help a person that doesnt want help. but i loved ur poem keep up the good work.

GOOD stuff 5/5 one thing stop abbrebating
your words .

Hey good poem, mitght be a good idea to try form stanzas to make it eaiser to read. Imm really sorry if this is true!
xo Mel

I hate drugs they destroy people i have been around alot of drugs but im lucy as ui have been strong enough to not take any good work x x x please voteon my poems to 5/5

Damn this is some good writing and it is true i know what u mean because i put my family through the same things well keep it up

That was so so so good its amzing

I Absolutly Loved It.. Your wordz and The Emotionz were Soo well Put and Just Really enjoyed Reading It.. And If This Is True, I Am Sooo Sorry!!!!
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Luv Hanz xx 5/5

U described ur-self to the world and that takes guts. Keep writing ur doing great!! :P

Ok, first of all i hate it when poems are written with words not spelled out, like u instead of you, etc. also, saying dis instead of this is kind of tacky . . if it has some meaning to you, like it represents you or where you're from or something then thats cool, i just dont think it adds much to poetry. also, you should be you're in the line about causing more and more strife - i wasnt sure if you knew that or mean to abbreviate it. the ideas behind the poem are really deep - once you get past the spelling its really touching. hope my suggestions help - i really think people appreciate a poem more when it doesnt look like a text message.

This is so much better - its a truly amazing poem :) the grammar's still not perfect, but i feel like you're saying this, not typing it now . . beautiful, touching writing! i'm very sorry about your sister if this is true- hope she gets better