Comments : Apple Shampoo (A Nonet)

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    You're a Nonetohilic {Did I spell that right?} Lol..

    But this was good! I liked these lines:

    "it smells of your sweet sweat
    and apple shampoo;"

    Cause I like my shampoo lol. But, nah. This was a great Nonet! 5/5 =)

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    I really enjoyed reading it. It was very good. My favorite kind of shampoo smells like apples. Great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Umm..I can almost smell that scent, great job

  • 17 years ago

    by Megan

    Hey, I loved it sweet and short...I think I know you?

  • 17 years ago

    by χ-я.ι.α-χ

    Wow! I loved this poem. It was short and cute. It had meaning. I loved the part about the apple shampoo, it was so random, but it added so much to the poem and made the poem stand out amongst all other love poems. I really really liked it :)! GREAT poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tyler

    I like this one the most today out of the billions i've read. GREAT JOB!

  • 17 years ago

    by holly

    Thanks for entering my competition i said i would comment on the poem everyone entered so here is. . .
    lol liked this poem, it was a kind of random title but you did a good job on it i liked the angle you took, great job