There was a sense in this poem, that you wanted it to rhyme and had an AABC format, but it didn't, so that kind of threw it off. The last line was a bit long, and I think you should shorten it. Overall, a good poem :)
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I liked this up to the last two stanza's.. i think it kinda got messed up there and i didn't really understand..still, the descriptions were good.. and there was a lot of emotion so i'll give it a 5/5..

You mention dream twice in one stanza too close together so you might want to change that.
My heart had broke, my tears had fell
[Fallen]
As i awoken, to an empty soul
[Upper i and awoke]
Yes, it was, but in reality it came From the heaven's above
[Throws off the flow]
The poem in itself was good but you might want to put more details in it. Try writing using the five senses or memories you and your sister share.]

"My heart had broke" it should be broken

and

"If i did loose you" **lose

Lol other than that it was a great poem. I'm glad you didn't really lose your sister! that would be horrible. Anyways, thanks for all the comments on my poems.

--Steph