Comments : Homesick Lover

  • 17 years ago

    by Dre4meR

    The flow was a little off I think...overall very nice and short poem

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Yeah as Dre4meR and Brianna said It was a very good poem, but the flow was a little off. I loved the ending though. Good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    I love the last line of this poem! It really sums it up well--- And the poem really shows how love can captivate some ones mind! Great write----5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Green M&M

    This one was really good.....great job.....5/5

  • Wow, its amazing. the flow is excellent! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Chris

    That is very straight foward....no metaphors or anything lol still it is great !! I love it very good writing 5/5

    CHris

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Its straight forward, its meaningful but easily understood, the flow seemed rocky in places but it was a good job. keep writing
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    A very nice one, I really love it
    great job

  • 17 years ago

    by Rene

    Really good poem, the flow is off a little bit, but overall it's nice, simple, and a very creative poem. GOOD one.