Aww.. that was so sad.. very good though. I really thought it was going to rhyme all the way through though. There was a lot of emotion in it.

Oh, and "I wish I would of told you"
of should be have.

Great poem. 5/5

Good poem, however if you start to rhyme you should contine to rhyme or just have freestyle with no rhmes. A sad but good poem,

Awwww.. thats so sad.. im sure you will, someday.. dont you have her email address or something? sorry, im ruining the poem.. hehe.. this was great, full of emotion and good descriptions!

He told you to pick your things,
^ i think it should be "pack" not "pick"

great job, filled with feelings! 5/5

Sad poem about losing a friend