Wow.. i absolutely loved this. The title caught my eye and I love the way that you ended it. The flow and rhythm throughout the poem was really good. 5/5*

OMGGG!!!!! I LOVEEEEEDDD this poem...besides from "IS the glass half empty or full" being my favorite expression...I loved how you used it..I figured this poem was going to be about a person not feeling so good..hence the glass half empty! but this was about a real glass and it made it much better!! I loved this poem alot..I like how the stars are glowing and your drinking from the glass, then when you realize you've been betrayed, the stars are covered and the glass is empty! Great write! I loved it!
-Krissey

Wow, it is a great poem, 5/5
i really like the lines
Each burning tear
Reminds I've been betrayed
nice job

It was a good poem. I like how you talked about everything with such detail. But I do find one problem, and it's only a suggestion that you don't HAVE to liste to, but all but the last stanza rhymed. In my opinion, I think it would be better is they all rhymed. And if you can't think os a word to rhyme with empty, go on google. I do that.
But other then that it was a good poem.

Wow really loved this, 5/5

I liked this poem. It was sad and very meaningful. The flow was very rhythmic. It was a great piece to read. I also want to say thanks for your comment. But anyway, keep writing, you have plenty of talent to share with the world. Whatever your experiences have been that have caused you to write with such emotion, I am sorry for, because we all go through life, searching for the answers. And we all get hurt. Anyway, hope you're doing okay. :) Maybe soon, the glass will be half full. ;)

~BJ~

Sooo sad...
*tear*
*not a sarcastic tear*
great job, ur talented, 5/5

love
tina
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Wow. I'm amazed. Just amazed && speechless. This has so many emotions mixed into it. And I can relate to it very well!!

Really good.
Just proves we've all been betrayed one way or another....
5/5